OH..3D? Nice pic!!!

What's the artist's website again? I have it lost in Favorites, but I remember it having dancing Rei.

yay, a pic of Kaji/Misato. ^_^ WIN

Alternatively, do you want an external focus or problem that Shinji and some or all of the girls must face? Does international politics cause a problem? Is there a fight for Shinji's hand, or is Shinji otherwise forced to deal with politics?

What about the Angels? Do they inexplicably stop coming? Does Shinji choose to continue to pilot? Do you want to ignore SEELE altogether, or do you want Shinji to have to deal with their conspiracy to Tang the world?

You have lots of options open to you; so far, you've just set the situation and introduced the initial reactions and maneuvering to it. You need to come up with a direction, and ideally at least a vague end point for the story so that you know where you're going.

I would not call her treatment in Those Who Hunt Eva that fair. The quick fix in the end "You wanted to sleep with other guys but they were not able to do that so you are innocent" was too fast and too stupid, like finding your wife in a bed with a lover but because you caught them before they did anything you say "it's all right nothing happened so no worries." Silly fix.

Happy ending... well you could say she has happy ending in most fics then, like sending her to Germany for the rest of the fic could be happy endings and so on...

And never liked all of those fics that you mentioned, found them boring and only mediocre at best, only Those Who Hunt eves was fairly good but shouldn't have been fixed so badly in the end.

In which of the fics you mentioned she doesn't have to share him with others? I kind of forget. Thought that she was just a herem girl in most of them, not particularly interesting at that.

My point was that she cannot take the place as substantial character in fix unless a good plotting involved. And Raa's fic seems to be lacking a good plotting . Its more like going whatever he feels at that particular moment.

Anyways we should discuss that thing in new lemontastica if Raa opens a topic regarding a fic. Discussing it here, will make some good leads go to waste as the thread will be taken out soon enough.

>>Anyways we should discuss that thing in new lemontastica

Before we can open up there, it has to work again. And if the bandwith is that limited that it's already exceeded, we might have to reconsider opening up at all... -_-

Yeah, i also just noticed the same thing. Make one wonder just how limited is the bandwith is in there. seems like VERY limited considering taht it was still opening so not really in full wheels.

Well, I have unexpectedly to leave for a couple of hours, so I'm not sure if I would have gotten the remaining preperations done today anyway...

The funny thing is that it's only in lemonastica.org and it's forum; the"other" associated ones are running fine =/

Ok, so either there's a lot of traffic generally directed towards Lemontastica or I'm stupidly popular.

As opposed to just being stupid.

But anyway, having looked over comments and pondered things, I don't think that Asuka would be a part of Shinji's intimate entourage by choice.

That said, it's entirely possible that I could be wrong and with some judicious rewriting, I could change things.

But I am very lazy.

Also, Darknemo2000, did you get that thing I sent you? Is that something you'd prefer to see more of?

Failing that, I do have something else that's Asuka based that some of her more ardent fans would approve of.

But that's for another time.

>>I'm stupidly popular.

This.

Yes I liked it Raa. In fact I liked the story much more than in here, and not because it was Asuka centric but because it had some darkness and angst in it.

And though I am A/S fan I do not mind her being with anyone else in the fic as long as you build her character up. Though this mostly goes to lemon fics...Sometimes i even like it more this way.

Though as far as normal fics go I am an ardent A/S fan .